This is really neat!! I think the characters in the basement roasting marshmallows and the twist ending could definitely have been foreshadowed a little better, but the art is adorable and it was so much fun to play ! :)
Thank you! I did try to provide a little foreshadowing (you running away noisily with your arms held high), but maybe that was too subtle? This is also supposed to be a minigame within a much bigger game, so there's definitely some context missing here. None the less, I really appreciate the feedback, it'll definitely help me improve things in the final version!
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This is really neat!! I think the characters in the basement roasting marshmallows and the twist ending could definitely have been foreshadowed a little better, but the art is adorable and it was so much fun to play ! :)
Thank you! I did try to provide a little foreshadowing (you running away noisily with your arms held high), but maybe that was too subtle? This is also supposed to be a minigame within a much bigger game, so there's definitely some context missing here. None the less, I really appreciate the feedback, it'll definitely help me improve things in the final version!
Cute